Monday, 16 May 2011

Emptiness and Longing.

Don't say that you care, 
Because this just isn't fair.
Your stringing me along with your conversation,
Filling me with hope and hesitation,
I just don't know what to do,
When all I have ever wanted is you. 
I know that I am the one to blame,
I am full of so much guilt and shame. 
All I want is just one more chance,
But I know now I wont get a second glance.
So many dreams of you and me,
Now fade into memory.
You'd said you loved me and would marry me someday,
I never imagined it'd end this way.
My heart feels empty I'm in so much pain,
These tears roll from my eyes like pouring rain.
You haunt my thoughts through day and night,
Without you nothing at all feels right.
Everywhere I go and everything I see,
Reminds me of what used to be. 
Tell me please because I need to know,
How can I ever let go? 


  1. Very melancholy. However it is delightful and full of feeling. My potluck:

  2. A hard position to be in. Nicely emoted.

  3. Yeah, been there. You have captured the pain of lost love.

  4. This is heartwrenching! I have been there. Nice write! Enjoy the potluck!

  5. blessings,
    love could be a pain when you did not win.

    well expressed sorrows.
    happy potluck.

  6. appreciated your support.


    How have you been?

    Hope to see you join our poetry potluck week 36 today!

    Week 36 Theme is sketches, images, and impressions,
    But you are NOT required to submit theme fitting pieces, old poems or poems unrelated to our theme are all welcome…

    Looking forward to reading you again.


  7. So much sadness and sorrow... From what I've experienced, it eventually fades away even if we don't believe it will at first... Bless you! ;)

  8. So sad makes me want to hug you. Powerfully expressed

  9. if you ever find out....can you let me know? right there too.

  10. I'm with lunawitch15 on this one! Very well put!