It is very true that when freedom is begged for people cannot grasp what to do with it. You captured the struggle nicely with this poem.
This is cute,love your style here,thanks for sharing.
Very well said. I love "my wings wont flap I cannot fly". Good self-awareness in this poem. I picture a bird standing on the edge of the nest......very soon:flying!:)
Don't forget the Kiwi.. I'm just saying..Loved it.
Now what to do with said freedom...good piece
I usually don't leave blahh comments, and cliche "Oh I liked this bla bla bla" but...I think I liked this one so much...I can't really go into detail too much as to why I like it..it's very....let me put it straight "Simple and Clean".Thanks for sharing.
An original and fresh style.
lovely.. actually explains one's emotions when neglected.
Thank you all for your lovely comments :) Much appreciatedMade me smile! :)