You kept me trapped,
Your caged possession.
You put my life on hold,
Halted progression.
How dumb was I,
So young so naive.
But something snapped inside,
Made me see what I couldn't believe.
I broke the bars of your little love trap,
I set myself free,
Enabled my wings to flap.
THis is really powerful stuff. Wonderful Poem!
ReplyDeleteVery cute poem. Glad you broke away!
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very well expressed sentiments.
ReplyDeleteGlad to see you in.
WAy to Go!
Happy New Year!
A++
ouch!!!! love as a trap :(
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comments.
ReplyDeleteThe poem was inspired by my relationship with my ex, first love is meant to be the best - not always true.
Bravo and an applause for the sentiments, to be born again and born free!! Have a great day and all good wishes for the New Year!!
ReplyDeleteMine is HERE
this is cute haha! mines here-http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2009/12/06/time-is-not-the-essence/
ReplyDeleteFly away fly away....brave bird! Proud soul.
ReplyDeleteGlad you recognized where you were.
ReplyDeleteFly free! Nice Potluck entry!
ReplyDeleteI am glad you were able to break free and able to create this poem. Both jobs well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you all for the lovely comments, each has made me smile!
ReplyDeleteStraight to the point yet it tells a great story. Good job!
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Kudos to you and wonderful poem. Loved it and the sentiment.
ReplyDeleteSorry to be late visiting from Potluck. Hope you enjoyed it and your holidays. Best wishes for 2011.
Jamie Dedes