Monday, 7 February 2011

Slaughtered Heart

My heart aches in pain,
And my eyes begin to water,
Your words in my mind stain,
My affection you swiftly slaughter.
How did I not see your intention?
I should have known from the start,
The little detail you failed to mention.
Stabbed deep into heart.

5 comments:

  1. ouch! But truly your words are wonders! :)

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  2. Vitriolic and to the point. Enjoyed your take on the theme. Glad to meet you and read through some of your poetry. Take care,

    crb.

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  3. wow...truly deep....i can relate to this feeling..raw emotion always makes a reader dig deeper into there own mind..

    thanks for the comments...

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